First, it'll be Utah 38, Cal 28.
Today we focused heavily on revision and self-assessment. We did two different revisions of the best version of your lead for your essay about "The Most Dangerous Game." The first revision was on paper, and you evaluated how well you used each of the four parts of the introduction that we studied - hook, bridge, summary, and thesis. We then took those, and began revising them on csddocs, which you shared with me so that I could comment on how you are doing. If you didn't finish your lead in class, do so this weekend.
Also, this weekend read for 20 minutes and upload your second free verse poem to Canvas.
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