Freshmen: Today we focused on the creative responses to art you crafted. You all did a great job. Read for 20 minutes and be ready to start Romeo and Juliet next week.
Sophomores: Today we continued our study of the four stages of the hero. Continue reading The Kite Runner and have it and a seminar prep finished for Monday's seminar. We will begin The Poisonwood Bible next week.
CNF: We concluded The Cave of Forgotten Dreams today and continued Part I of The World Without Us; the goal is to be able to talk about both texts on Monday.
Thursday, February 28, 2013
Tuesday, February 26, 2013
Tuesday, February 26 and Wednesday, February 27
Freshmen: Today we focused on the idea of poetry as a creative response to art, and studied poems and art from the book Heart to Heart and used them as our models. Your task is to find a work of art that you like, and write two poems, each from a different motif that we studied. You are to put this together as some sort of presentation - mount it on a posterboard, make a book, do something electronically, it's up to you. This is due Thursday; read for 20 minutes tonight and Wednesday.
Sophomores: Our focus was on the history of musicals and fairy tales, as well as the four stages of the hero. Finish The Kite Runner for Monday's seminar.
CNF: We began The Cave of Forgotten Dreams today.
Sophomores: Our focus was on the history of musicals and fairy tales, as well as the four stages of the hero. Finish The Kite Runner for Monday's seminar.
CNF: We began The Cave of Forgotten Dreams today.
Monday, February 25, 2013
Monday, February 25
Freshmen: Today we focused on some things that student writers have done well in some recent letters and essays. Homework is to read for 20 minutes.
Sophomores: Today we focused on chapters 15-19 in The Kite Runner. Finish the book for next Monday.
CNF: Today we focused on Part I of The World Without Us. The goal is to have this read by Friday.
Sophomores: Today we focused on chapters 15-19 in The Kite Runner. Finish the book for next Monday.
CNF: Today we focused on Part I of The World Without Us. The goal is to have this read by Friday.
Friday, February 22, 2013
Friday, February 22
Freshmen: Your homework is to write your own division and classification essay and submit it to turnitin.com by 7:59 AM Monday morning. If you need the login info about turnitin, go to the post on August 30, 2012. Read for 20 minutes tonight.
Sophomores: Due for Monday is everything in The Kite Runner through (and including) Chapter 19; have some prep work for a seminar on Monday.
CNF: We're making our way through Part I of The World Without Us.
Sophomores: Due for Monday is everything in The Kite Runner through (and including) Chapter 19; have some prep work for a seminar on Monday.
CNF: We're making our way through Part I of The World Without Us.
Friday, February 15, 2013
Friday, February 15
Freshmen: Today we focused a little bit on division and classification, the next rhetorical device we will study. We also tried our hand at imitating Billy Collins with a poem, which if you want to finish and type up can be turned in next week. Read for 20 minutes three times over the break, and Chapter 10 vocab is due next Friday. If you would like, the freshmen boys' basketball team plays Saturday at 2:40 at Judge in the finals of the Freshmen Tournament. I am sure the team would appreciate the support of any students who can attend.
Sophomores: Today we focused on the Hero Catch-Phrase Project and did some reading; due Wednesday is chapters 8-14 in The Kite Runner. We will have a seminar that day, so please prepare with some sort of notes or reflection. The essay we began in class that was an analysis of your Poetry Out Loud poems is extra credit, and if you would like to finish it, type it up and bring it Wednesday. Chapter 10 vocab is due next Friday. If you would like, the freshmen boys' basketball team plays Saturday at 2:40 at Judge in the finals of the Freshmen Tournament. I am sure the team would appreciate the support of any students who can attend.
CNF: We concluded Life After People and began the Prelude to The World Without Us. Please finish the Prelude for Wednesday.
Basketball: Congratulations on a great season. We are done at Sunnyside at 5 today. Be to Judge at 1:45 dressed and ready to go tomorrow for the championship.
Sophomores: Today we focused on the Hero Catch-Phrase Project and did some reading; due Wednesday is chapters 8-14 in The Kite Runner. We will have a seminar that day, so please prepare with some sort of notes or reflection. The essay we began in class that was an analysis of your Poetry Out Loud poems is extra credit, and if you would like to finish it, type it up and bring it Wednesday. Chapter 10 vocab is due next Friday. If you would like, the freshmen boys' basketball team plays Saturday at 2:40 at Judge in the finals of the Freshmen Tournament. I am sure the team would appreciate the support of any students who can attend.
CNF: We concluded Life After People and began the Prelude to The World Without Us. Please finish the Prelude for Wednesday.
Basketball: Congratulations on a great season. We are done at Sunnyside at 5 today. Be to Judge at 1:45 dressed and ready to go tomorrow for the championship.
Thursday, February 14, 2013
Thursday, February 14
Freshmen: Today we participated in Poetry Out Loud. Read for 20 minutes and be working on vocab.
Sophomores: Today we participated in Poetry Out Loud. Keep reading The Kite Runner, work on vocab, and your poem analysis is due on Wednesday.
CNF: Today we finished Life After People in preparation for reading The World Without Us.
Basketball: Great win last night; we're at Sunnyside until 5 today and tomorrow. Be to Judge for the championship game at 1:45 on Saturday; there is a team meal to follow.
Sophomores: Today we participated in Poetry Out Loud. Keep reading The Kite Runner, work on vocab, and your poem analysis is due on Wednesday.
CNF: Today we finished Life After People in preparation for reading The World Without Us.
Basketball: Great win last night; we're at Sunnyside until 5 today and tomorrow. Be to Judge for the championship game at 1:45 on Saturday; there is a team meal to follow.
Wednesday, February 13, 2013
Analytical Essay Example for Poetry Out Loud
***For those of you who want a model, here is the essay I wrote in response to the poem I memorized for Poetry Out Loud.
Jeff Baird
Analysis
Announcement Lead
Strong, Punched Statement Conclusion
Analysis
Announcement Lead
Strong, Punched Statement Conclusion
In Balance With This Life, This Death
William Butler Yeats’s poem, “An Irish Airman Foresees His Death” is about a fighter pilot going off to war. He knows - in fact, seems to hope - that he will die up in the clouds, never to return. The poem begins with the assertion, “I know that I shall meet my fate/ somewhere among the clouds above”. The airman is neither happy nor sad about this, neither fearful nor excited. He has simply accepted his fate, for no one can escape fate.
The speaker goes on to state, “Those that I fight I do not hate;/ those I thatgu ard I do not love;/ my country is Kiltartan Cross,/ my countrymen Kiltartan’s poor;/ no likely end could bring them loss,/ nor leave them happier than before.” If this is true, if he neither hates his enemy nor loves his countrymen, if his fighting and sacrifice make no difference, why go to war at all? Because it is fate. And because he cannot escape fate, he must seek it out, and this internal impulse is his motivation. He is not responding to external pressures nor going foto r for reasons we typically assume men do: “No law nor duty bade me fight/ nor public men nor cheering crowds”. This man is stirred neither by patriotism nor fame, only “A lonely impulse of delight/ drove to this tumult in the clouds”.
This term “delight” is unsettling, for there is no happiness here, only acceptance. The poem’s overall tone is one of somberness - not sadness, exactly, but a melancholy resignation. The speaker may desire the peace he thinks death will bring, but he doesn’t seek it out with the gusto typical of those embarking on a quest. The speaker says he “balanced all, brought all to mind” and in this balancing comes to realize “The years to come seemed waste of breath/ a waste of breath the years behind”. It is in this revelation we come to learn why there is no sadness or fear as he prepares for war: if everything to come after this present moment, and everything leading up to this present moment, is a waste of breath, then this moment is also waste of breath, unremarkable, as drab as the previous present moment, a glum equality of waste.
It is this equality, or perhaps the better term is balance, that is the heart of the poem. The speaker’s last line is “In balance with this life, this death.” It is this line that clarifies the poem, for everything in the poem speaks of balance. Structurally, the poem is sixteen lines long, divided equally between two eight-line sentences. Each line is four iambic feet - eight syllables - echoing both the military beating of the drums as well as reinforcing the structural balance. There is duality and opposites throughout the poem, ranging from the how the outcome of the war will neither hurt nor hinder Kiltartan’s poor, to the fighter’s lack of emotion toward both those he fights and defends.
This then brings us to a final realization, and a final question, that being whether it is possible for two nothings to equal out. For if a death is to matter at all, even in terms of simply balancing out the life that preceded it, isn’t it necessary for the life itself to have meant something?
Tuesday, February 12, 2013
Tuesday, February 12 and Wednesday, February 13
Freshmen: Today we had our in-class Poetry Out Loud competition. You all did a good job. Tonight and tomorrow, read for 20 minutes, and work on vocabulary as Chapter 10 is due February 22.
Sophomores: Today we had our in-class Poetry Out Loud competition. You all did a good job. Keep up with your reading from The Kite Runner, and work on vocabulary as Chapter 10 is due February 22.
CNF: Today we focused on the question of what would happen if every human being on Earth suddenly disappeared. As we addressed this idea, we watched Life After People and began reading The World Without Us.
Basketball: We're at Sunnyside until 5:30 today.
Sophomores: Today we had our in-class Poetry Out Loud competition. You all did a good job. Keep up with your reading from The Kite Runner, and work on vocabulary as Chapter 10 is due February 22.
CNF: Today we focused on the question of what would happen if every human being on Earth suddenly disappeared. As we addressed this idea, we watched Life After People and began reading The World Without Us.
Basketball: We're at Sunnyside until 5:30 today.
Friday, February 8, 2013
Friday, February 8
Freshmen: Today we took the vocab exam and started writing an analytical essay about the poem you are memorizing for Poetry Out Loud. Read for 20 minutes and memorize your poem for Tuesday's class.
Sophomores: Today we took the vocab exam and took some time to read. Chapters 1-7 are due on Monday, when we will have our seminar. Memorize your poem for Wednesday's class.
CNF: We finished reading The Last Lecture and will discuss it Monday. Have The World Without Us for next week.
Basketball: We are at Park City, likely at Treasure Mountain Junior High School. We play Park City at Judge on Saturday at 6.
Sophomores: Today we took the vocab exam and took some time to read. Chapters 1-7 are due on Monday, when we will have our seminar. Memorize your poem for Wednesday's class.
CNF: We finished reading The Last Lecture and will discuss it Monday. Have The World Without Us for next week.
Basketball: We are at Park City, likely at Treasure Mountain Junior High School. We play Park City at Judge on Saturday at 6.
Thursday, February 7, 2013
Thursday, February 7
Freshmen: Today we focused on the poems you are memorizing for Poetry Out Loud and did some work with public reading and analysis of the poems. Read for 20 minutes tonight; vocab Chapter 9 is due tomorrow; you need to recite your poem on Tuesday in class.
Sophomores: Today we introduce the Hero Catch-Phrase Project. Keep reading, vocab is due tomorrow, and you will recite your poem next Wednesday.
CNF: We made some progress with The Last Lecture; the goal is to be done by Monday. The next book you need is The World Without Us.
Basketball: We are at Sunnyside; done at 5.
Sophomores: Today we introduce the Hero Catch-Phrase Project. Keep reading, vocab is due tomorrow, and you will recite your poem next Wednesday.
CNF: We made some progress with The Last Lecture; the goal is to be done by Monday. The next book you need is The World Without Us.
Basketball: We are at Sunnyside; done at 5.
Tuesday, February 5, 2013
Tuesday, February 5 and Wednesday, February 6
Freshmen: Today we did a number of things: We read Chapter 6 from They Say I Say about planting a naysayer; we reviewed last semester's final; we practiced your POL poems; and we shared your definition essays. Please read for 20 minutes Tuesday and Wednesday, and vocab is due Friday. Keep practicing your poems.
Sophomores: Today we introduced the Hero Catch-Phrase Project, wrote about your poems, and learned more about kite fighting. Keep up with the reading, memorize your poems, and remember vocab is due Friday.
CNF: We had some great discussions on things Pauch writes about in The Last Lecture.
Sophomores: Today we introduced the Hero Catch-Phrase Project, wrote about your poems, and learned more about kite fighting. Keep up with the reading, memorize your poems, and remember vocab is due Friday.
CNF: We had some great discussions on things Pauch writes about in The Last Lecture.
Monday, February 4
Freshmen: Today we picked poems for Poetry Out Loud. We then read an essay that defines what crime is. Your definition essays are due Tuesday. Be sure to have a good title, type and double space your essay, and include the lead and conclusion technique in your header. Begin memorizing your poems now - we will have our class-wide competition on Tuesday.
Sophomores: Today we began The Kite Runner. Check the reading schedule.
CNF: We continued with The Last Lecture.
Sophomores: Today we began The Kite Runner. Check the reading schedule.
CNF: We continued with The Last Lecture.
Monday, February 4, 2013
The Kite Runner Reading Schedule 2013
The Kite Runner Reading Schedule 2013
2/4 - Begin reading
2/11 - Chapters 1-7 due
2/20 - Chapters 8-14 due
2/25 - Chapters 15-19 due
3/4 - Book due
2/4 - Begin reading
2/11 - Chapters 1-7 due
2/20 - Chapters 8-14 due
2/25 - Chapters 15-19 due
3/4 - Book due
*For each due date, you should have a seminar prep that takes one of the two following forms: Either a page long reaction, or a dozen notes (both questions and comments, with page numbers).
**The next book we will read is The Poisonwood Bible.
Friday, February 1, 2013
Friday, February 1
Freshmen: Today we saw several good examples of how to use definition in an essay. We have seen examples of writers defining themselves, cultural groups, food and the writer's relationship to it, places, and words. Your task is to decide on a topic for an essay and write one that uses definition as its primary mode. Of course, in order to define something, you may have to compare and contrast it to something else, tell stories, and provide examples, so all of the rhetorical devices we have learned thus far will help you. You may also want to use what someone else says about your topic, so using all the templates from They Say I Say will help tremendously.
Your essay should be typed, double spaced, have a correct header that indicates what lead and conclusion technique you're using, and have an interesting title. Everything, including the title, should be formatted correctly. This is due Tuesday.
Also, read for 20 minutes this weekend and know that Chapter 9 vocab is due next Friday.
Sophomores: Today we revisited the notion of theme, differentiating it from a mere idea in a text, and took the vocab exam. We'll start The Kite Runner on Monday. Don't for get that your essay about my main man Joseph Campbell's ideas in The Hero's Adventure is due Monday, along with the think sheet.
CNF: We began reading The Last Lecture. I want you to write down a dozen or so things to talk about in our seminar.
Basketball: Check out at the start of 8th today; game is at 3:00. Practice tomorrow at Judge - you can arrive at 7:30; stretching at 7:50; film afterward until 11:00.
Your essay should be typed, double spaced, have a correct header that indicates what lead and conclusion technique you're using, and have an interesting title. Everything, including the title, should be formatted correctly. This is due Tuesday.
Also, read for 20 minutes this weekend and know that Chapter 9 vocab is due next Friday.
Sophomores: Today we revisited the notion of theme, differentiating it from a mere idea in a text, and took the vocab exam. We'll start The Kite Runner on Monday. Don't for get that your essay about my main man Joseph Campbell's ideas in The Hero's Adventure is due Monday, along with the think sheet.
CNF: We began reading The Last Lecture. I want you to write down a dozen or so things to talk about in our seminar.
Basketball: Check out at the start of 8th today; game is at 3:00. Practice tomorrow at Judge - you can arrive at 7:30; stretching at 7:50; film afterward until 11:00.
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